All Comments on 'The Hook-up'

Wow! I loved that. Following thru the motions thinking this was so brutal then realizing it was a fantasy played out. Loved it. It was like I had forgotten the beginning. AM. Well done my friend. Well done.

Nicely done story, and well written, Emi.

It was let down a little by the end. Why on Earth did he pull out, instead of coming inside her cunt? It's not as though at her age she was going to get pregnant, and what man in the world would rather pull out than come inside?

Anyway, good one.

Well done and a well swritten story, Looking fwds to reading the others and more as they come along.. Keep it up. It was just the way a hotel session shoudl be :) for round one at least....