by homerdepot
Buried here in the literotica undergrowth is this hilarious gem. Clever, earthy, descriptive, brings one right back to Boston and its particular representation of the endless, timeless parade of human frailities.
She thought that over. "Personally, Father, I think giving you a blow job will make a woman feel closer to God than Hail Mary's."
Beautiful.
It’s not clever, it’s not funny, it’s not inventive, it’s not original, it’s not well thought out, it’s not well executed, and it’s not well written. Honestly I’ve read better reddit stories. Whatever you do as a day job, as long as it’s not writing, stick to that.
Finally a funny, relevant, engaging story that I enjoyed very much. It has earth tones. Very cool twist to an awful trope, that is, presenting a caring demon. It reminded me of a line from the old Pogo cartoon strip, where the character poking the dugout through the swamp says "We have met the enemy, and he's us".