by MarshalMarmont1815
I felt it was an awesome story. It was hot. I look forward to you posting more chapters.
Wow, she must be able to tell the future, since at the beginning of the story you wrote that his mother died when he was 12 and his father married her four years later. This means they didn't meet until he was 16. She knew what his cock looked like three years before they met,
Yeah, it's fiction, but that doesn't mean logic and reason aren't a factor. You just had to give him a cock that is overly large, even by porn standards.
Ok. There are some errors in math, etc. You can work on that. But you have a solid story going and the sex is hot. Keep it up. (mine is). Thanks.