by kimmykimkim
Perfect how you went on and on. I want to be him. And move to town and take care oh her daily!
Good job
You must be very sexy. Please excite us with more stories.
I love the level of detail! One of the best story series I've read on Literotica. Can't wait for Parts 4, 5, 6 and more. Hope she continues to perfect her skills and gets lots of practice!!
Seriously ... Excellent writing!
The only things that annoyed me was the HUGE cock, with a grapefruit sized head, the DD tits that sounded like ZZZ tits, and an ass the size of two yoga balls.
The fact that he came three times, was ok because that works.
If she had C cups, and he a nine inch cock, that would have worked much better.
Your story is very hot and yet romantically sexy as well. Evidently being female, you know more about the female side of the sex act than any male writer can know. Keep up your erotic writing and I hope to see more in the NEAR future! And by the way, the idiot who wrote the bad review regarding your description of the characters' features is OCD and forgets this is FICTION! maybe he should see some of the unrealistic Anime cartoons! Good luck!