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by Probus888

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This was very well written! I'll be honest I caught myself laughing at the end

MaonaighMaonaighover 1 year ago
Just because you're paranoid...

Having discovered your stories through "...the Blizzard" I thought I'd check out some of the others. A number of HPL's contemporaries (eg Frank Belknap Long, Sonia Greene, C M Eddy) all said that despite outward appearances he had a good sense of humour so he might have enjoyed this. Like your previous commenter, I had an out-loud chuckle at the end. A nice five star illustration of paranoia (and sometimes they really are out to get you).

sporgasboredsporgasboredover 1 year ago

Well done. Eldritch LOL to you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I thought about giving this a 3 and then decided that would be too generous.

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I write stories mostly for my pleasure with a plot-line and I prefer stories which have believable motivations. My main focus seems to be erotic horror, somewhat inspired by H.P. Lovecraft, but I do write in other categories, too. Yes, I know tentacle-monsters etc. aren't real...