The Hot List Ch. 04

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At home there is a picture of Pam in a pale green sun dress. She is sitting on the steps of St. Johns Bascilica smiling. Inset in the corner is the same picture of her grandmother, in black in white. Underneath is a framed 3X5 index card covered in scribbling. Pam still doesn't know wht it is exactly. I tell her it's the chemical composition of love.

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That's it. The end. The hot list really does exist. I've got a feeling it's spread out of the south, Sams' brother in law Came for a visit from Pittsburgh and took a hand full back with him. So, ladies, if you see a bunch of old guys in the mall or the entrance to Wal-Mart, scribbling and arguing, leave them alone. It's just harmless fun.

and you may want to stand a little straighter. Remember, you get points for projection.

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AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

"Then dad got sick, prostrate cancer. " NO!!!

PROSTATE not Prostrate!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I just absolutely adore the idea of a bunch of oldies doing a hot list of women. It's wonderful and hilarious 😂 lovely story as well. BardnotBard

DazzyDDazzyD9 months ago

Your writing is Super: some of your works are second to none! D

SpankerSamSpankerSam9 months ago

THANK YOU!!!!!! It isn't often that a story will move me to misty eyes smiles. But this one surely did. Being an old cogger, "Wait! do they still use that term?" of my early 70's I remember terms like that. And since I am married to the most wonderful woman, I guess I can understand the meanings in the story better than others. It was a joy to read and brought back a lot of memories. You are a very talented person. Again. Thank you for a very lovely and touching story.

LanmandragonLanmandragon10 months ago

Heartwarming; needs to be collected into one story, though.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

A bit shorter than some of your other epistles, but good nonetheless..

10 outa 5. On to the next….

tsgtcapttsgtcapt11 months ago

Great story wrap... could encourage me to check out a Norway destination. Loved it!!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I loved it, and the entire series. It's a nice change to actually read about a Loving Wife story in the "Loving Wives" forum. Some of us older readers appreciate it. My wife and I have been married 42 years now, soon to be 43 next month, so I know how it goes. And yes, she's my first wife.

NonSequitourNonSequitourabout 1 year ago

Everyone knows alcohol alters one's judgement/discernment; i.e., turn a 3 into an 8. The old guys from the retirement home may develop the same handicap sober. Years ago a friend suggested a simpler system on a 5 point scale, to wit:

1. Wouldn't fuck her.

2. Would fuck her.

3. Would eat her, then fuck her.

4. Would fuck her, then eat her.

5. Would let buddy fuck her, then eat her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice to have a true loving wife (and husband) story in this category (probably there are a lot more but I don't often spot them)! The only gripe I have is it could've been published in one go rather than four chapters but it really is a very minor one! As per normal a well written story from qhml1 and very enjoyable! 5*

Dobbin55

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