All Comments on 'The Hotel Room Pt. 01'

by Lordsmythe

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TartanslutTartanslutabout 9 years ago
Nice

She's a very lucky lady! Looking forward to more.

emma009emma009about 9 years ago
And then?

You painted a very seductive scene my Lord.

I'm glad to see "Pt.01" in the title...

drumdancerdrumdancerover 8 years ago
Unable to breathe

Reading this first chapter without taking a breath, I found it captivating. Indeed, Miss Smith is a lucky girl awaiting her fate !

CatmooreCatmooreabout 8 years ago
You excite me so much!

Well done sir again your writing took me near to What Miss Smith experienced.

Thanks

Cat

HellenPHellenP4 months ago

Very nice story...

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