All Comments on 'The Hotwife Games Ch. 01'

You need to keep the tease going. Once she does it, the story loses its tension.

But I hope that you build some depth to the characters and answer the why, beside the money, they are doing this show, putting themselves on display.

quite a opening ...i''m looking forward to the next few chapters

Fantastic start. What a great idea for a game show. Can't wait to see what the first challenge will be for the HW sluts.

I like the story idea, now let’s see if you can paint a picture of erotic behavior by this sweet little wife to win the slutiest, nasty, sexiest, whorish “Hotwife” of all times!

I love games xoxooo Annette

Wow bring it on!!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

I love it. I is my fantasy with my wife. I'm not sure what it is about seeing my wife flirting with other men that is so sexually arousing. Keep up the good work.

Love the twist of a game show! My husband and I have been a pert pf many swinging contests and they are very exciting. This takes it no a whole new level!!

You wrote: "I have a few more chapters ready to go, but would like to gauge reactions and feedback first. If you'd like more, let me know! :)"

Okay, where are they? It's been 6 days since your first post that didn't really have any action in it, so where are those few more chapters?

I like where it is going and would enjoy more.

Please load up some more!

Can’t wait to see how this proceeds.

Love it!

I'm enjoying this, her statement about winning the show at the end was very hot!! A cuckolds dream.

Ohh boy, loved this context. Please release the next phase

Not seen any story like this before, looking forward to hearing what comes next

Diana is my dream GF. hope she likes anal...

I wanna play ! Good writing all the way around !

I liked the cuckold theme, and the game show format is a new twist on this, can't wait to read some more. Writing style looks polished, I felt like I was watching along with you...

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

Please continue ASAP.

4 stars. I believe in finishing every story or series I start. I read CH7 first because it came up on a btb tag search. Thus I arrive here, to put CH7 in perspective. Very well written, but probably not my type of fare. But, now I'm committed. On to CH2.

It seems strange that Rakesh was shocked at the way his wife was acting. He is familiar with the show and presumably so is she. He brought her there to participate.

Interesting story line. I will read on reserving 5 stars for quality of the action. With 14 chapters in the series, it needs to heat up in chapter 2 to keep my interest

Clever & with lots of promise.

Really good start for a story i hope to love the same as this chapter

Hm.. that was good intro - beginning.. I'm definitely looking forward to the rest now..

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