All Comments on 'The House Boat - Day 04'

What a fantastic story line. You are truely a well written and creative writer. Please continue. Thank you

I wouldn't trust him as far as rin could throw him..

Great story! I just hope you will keep the relationship between Chris & Rin! Please don’t bring Vincent into it!!

I am loving this story! I can so relate to Rin, my family hates me too!! Keep up the good work. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

I am devouring your stories as much as they are me.

This just gets better and better, and, you made this chapter longer, thank you!!!!

I certainly love this story and hope and pray you can make this tale into your opus.

I want to see a lot more chapters, you can this tale anywhere and your devoted readers would happily follow.

I’m wedded to your characters so please keep the chapters rolling on.

Scores a deserving 5/5

I've been patiently awaiting part 4, and I'm glad that it's finally here. I thoroughly enjoyed most of it but honestly I didn't care for the bondage part. But the fact that Rin was free to slip out of her bonds at will did remove my initial revulsion and I didn't skip over it. That's just my hang up. I equate BDSM stuff to abuse because I was physically abused and beaten as a child and young adult. Nonetheless I enjoyed the rest enough to still give it 5 stars.

I would like to see them make peace with Vincent as a brother but nothing more. Keep up the good work

It set me up for a memory. Me and my wife. She's a naive virgin in love. I am almost a decade older, more than once heartbroken, with the weight of former relationships, a cynic almost disillusioned with love. She took the first step. The first kiss. I didn't even want to fuck her for fear of hurting and hurting her. I brought her to orgasm three times with my clothes on. But she begged me to take her. To take her virginity. I broke down. And when I came inside her, I suddenly felt like she was the one for life.

And I haven't let go of her for 20 years.

Okay, back 4 months ago when I first read this installment, I got to the last page and read Vincent's apology. The 180 degree reversal seemed so fake and out of character. 🙄 But having read the finished product, and not wanting to spoil anything for new readers, I'm only going to comment that when I finally got to the very end that I was happy with the way things worked out between all of the siblings including Vincent. Great story!

What’s next?

Hmm... not sure I like Vincent being redeemed that fast, but I hope he meant what he said that he wouldn't tell on them.

Still, the proposal was cute, and the story seems to continue being grounded in realism, for good or bad (or more appropriately, "in sickness and health").

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Hmm... not sure I like Vincent being redeemed that fast, but I hope he meant what he said that he wouldn't tell on them.

Still, the proposal was cute, and the story seems to continue being grounded in realism, for good or bad (or more appropriately, "in sickness and health").

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OUTSTANDING.....CINCO ESTRELLAS!