All Comments on 'The House Boat - Day 05'

Super curious who was calling. Love the story so far. I don't think Vincent is the one that told. I have two suspicions for the next chapter(s) but I don't wanna put the idea in the readers' heads if I'm wrong or right. 5/5

Rin has some severe mental issues. Doesn’t he realize that by using his phone they are probably being tracked! I have my theories on who told their plans, but will wait to see how it plays out! Why would he tell Kate?? You don’t trust anyone with that type of secret!!

The narrative in the first page was tiring for me but the rest of the story was great. I'm looking forward to seeing the story arc play out... 4*

Tremendulous- simply tremendulous. Loving this series.

Fantastic!!! Keep it going, more please, much more!!!!!!

Scores 5/5

This is excellent.

I normally cannot stand women who are agents of chaos, but you have made Rin amazing and adorable.

Well done.

Good luck with the story!

Loving this. Thank you again.

Words cannot adequately describe how very much Not My Thing anal is, but the writing and the romance here are worth the nausea. Eagerly anticipating more, though preferably through the front door.

You need to give Rin an attitude adjustment, because she goes off on her brother for silly and stupid reasons. Cat you just let them get along without her snapping at him in every other paragraph? The story would be much better!

How does she not know what her twin brother does for a living? She wonders if he’s a lawyer like their other brother. You’d think she’d notice if he’d been away at law school,

To the 3 comments below:

No attitude adjustment . Rin is a fucked up girl disowned by he parents ( previously , why she didn't know how her twin turned out ) . Just getting out of an abusive relationship with a dick head . Who's main girl was Rins best friend who told him to use her .

The story would not be better if she wasn't "snapping at him in every other paragraph".

It's a wonder she can feel or love at all .

Chris , her twin by birth . Being a decent guy . And loving and protecting her in their youth . Is the only one who gets her .

But Vincent knows how special his little sis is . Because he's mostly to blame for screwing her head up . And because he has any sense at all . Is why he feels so guilty .

And the one below who says "how very much Not My Thing anal is" . This is so not about anal . That I think you like it and just want more .

Good Novell , but please end.

CINCO ESTRELLAS!