by TellMeATale2013
The story has serious flaws mostly due to the author needing education in the basics. All the frequent use of "...' and "word -- word" wrecks the content desire to read beyond very far.
more focuse but still love to hear more may be chapter 2&3 ty yours leann
I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. I think I have an inkling of who Ally's girlfriend is.