All Comments on 'The House Pt. 03'

Been many years since I bought a lottery ticket. I once won $500.00 on a scratch off ticket. I probably had lost that much over the years by buying weekly $2.00 tickets. Since I figured I had recouped what I had payed into the system, I decided never to buy another ticket. That guy Jim probably got what he deserved!

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To start with I had to grade this one just like the 1st 2. It got an Outstanding Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating from me.

I have to say this series of tales was a great relief to consume in the LW category. A great perception, building on some extra power helping someone who needed it while they were down. I loved the twist of having the half brother and mother wanting nothing to do with bad guy and leaving the money to the person in need was awesome. That twist is what moved it from Excellent Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating to the Outstanding Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating I gave it. Nice move.

Thanks for another great tale. I am looking forward to more of you productions.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

Clearly - I'm with Demander - I wanna know where this house is.

Love this tale. Hope there's more!

Where is a loving wife? This is garbage about a ner-do-well who uses other people.

No LW tale in this 1 and half page. Just void.

Sorry, but any kind of gambling plots are just not my kind of stories.

Way too many lives have been harmed by this addiction.

Loved the humor and easy flow of the storyline. 4.3*

Great story. It was time for an undeserving occupant.

Loved the story and the fact that the house got the last laugh and got rid of the POS that was trying to weasel his way in.

IMHO this ending was not necessary and did nothing to add to what came before.

Very nice way tying all the ideas together

Forget Demander, let me get that address. On second thought , just forget I asked. That house kills people. Great story, great series and great finish. Glad everyone got their happy ending. You’re quite the story teller.

great imagination, i liked the story

I love the mystery, and the benevolence, mixed with its own sense of ethics, of the house. I hope it inspires an ongoing series. 5 stars.

La casa se ha convertido en uno de los mejores mc de toda literotica

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