All Comments on 'The House Showing'

I liked it, although it was a little standard, without anything to spice it up too much or make it stand out a lot, it's still pretty good. One thing I will say is, Use punctuation. Really, the whole thing is one run on sentance seperated into paragraphs, which detracts from the enjoyment of the story. Other than that though, I enjoyed it ^^

Real Estate Agent shows a female client a house. While extolling the advantages of owning a house with a hottub the lady falls in. This breaks the ice ~ and things began heating up immediately as erotic activity begins. A Hot Read. Well Written!

I am a 20 year old female. Slim and attractive, I've always fantasized doing something like this in an empty house with a man as my real estate agent. Very hot. Loved it.