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by katiegray

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portal65portal65over 7 years ago
Nice one!

You keep improving with your writing. Only one error that distracted me, but that didn't stop me from enjoying the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
the houseguest

Lose the "to be continued". It's a waste of electrons. if your story is properly concluded, then it foreshadows the next part.

maddictmaddictover 7 years ago
Keep telling us Virginia is home.

Sharon must be in heaven all ready, with this young Stud at her service.

Leave is 2 wks.? This is day one.!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Interesting plot

I wonder what would happen if Tom arrives and caught his friend fucking his mother...

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