All Comments on 'The Housewife Gets A Double Header'

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fumunda cheezefumunda cheezeover 19 years ago
Huh?

" Would it cost her relationship with Kevin?"

Was Kevin another guy she was fucking that she didn't want her husband and Derrick to know about?

Good job except for the mistaken character statement.

It ended rather abruptly, unless there is more planned in another chapter or two, describing further the weekend activities and maybe further into the future..

Was it just a one time fuck? did they fuck all weekend? She brought enough clothes for the entire weekend. One is made to wonder. Being that the couple had no children, they could have fucked in the couple's own bed without the need of an expensive hotel room.

Did she continue to see Derrick? Did she see him when Kirk was not with them? Did Kirk mind being cuckolded if she did?

You kind of left the reader hanging.

gizzmo301gizzmo301over 19 years ago
nice

this was a very good story and very well written. I did enjoy it very much. One thing that I never understood and it happens in a lot of stories is why hubby is so nice understanding and the wife loves him so much... When its ok for her to have sex with someone else. You never hear a hubby say I love her so much she let me have sex with another women... most of the time he's a cheating two timer... anyway Great story

craigoolcraigoolover 19 years ago
Good job

mixing up a threesome with a little B&D play. Very realistic and well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
How Real

Plausible - Possible - But Honestly - If I cared deeply - loved you my wife enough to share you would I risk this and your possible reactions - the effect it could have on our lifelong future - sexy - yes / erotic maybe - now what - where does this go now - implied is watching - maybe cockolding - how wonderful - will she still respect him in the morning - will he respect the author that had him do this - maybe if she allows him someone else too - will we respect the author - you write to evoke our feelings and emotion - well, here we are by your invitation - try to be fair - Regards

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