All Comments on 'The Hunt'

Very similar to a short story I read a while ago. This has more interesting characters, dialogue, action, and a more gripping story. My advice: get yourself in print. I'd certainly read a book if it ran like this. (I'd also invest in a spell-checker!)

the ending sucked!

I enjoyed this story, had a good plot with a twist at the end. keep writing you have a great talent

an interesting, riveting tale. Although I don't care for the bad guys, or in this case gal, winning. Thank you for your hard work.

Woodmanone

And not a bad job, either. I didn’t particularly like the ending but that’s a subjective thing and it’s certainly the author’s prerogative to write the ending the way he or she wants it. I do have a problem, though, with authors who put erroneous facts in their story and expect no one to know the difference. Case in point: the Glock. It has no manual safety. Case in point 2: The Remington 1100 is not a bolt-action rifle. It is a semi-automatic shotgun. And has been for maybe 50 years. I understand this is fiction, but mistakes like these turn good stories into laughable stories.