All Comments on 'The Hunt Ch. 05 - Bridesmaid Comes'

...whereas Chapters 1-4 were intriguing fantasy, this chapter has become bizarre. It remains intriguing, though, and I wonder where it is going next. There were a few typos which jarred a bit although not enough to spoil the narrative. Careful proof-reading should overcome this problem.

5 stars - Even though I don't like horror movies, it is still a good horror movie.

Even the confusion between first and third person in the narration works as it somehow illustrates a split personality that has gone to the deep end.

Very hot, and could only be you Mama - that distinctive voice shines through xxxx