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All Comments on 'The Hunter'

by twilightdreams69

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wow

Amazing start! Would love to read some back story about these two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Excellent Start

I really hope you continue! I love your style and was hanging off every word.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

That was amazing. Loved it,

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 4 years ago

Sorry but that just didn’t yank my chain. It was more a paragraph into their story without anything to justify it. Nothing really about why he felt the need to kidnap her and keep her there.

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