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All Comments on 'The Huntsman and the Nix Ch. 05'

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Bellie444Bellie444about 2 years ago
It’s all action! 🤩

Nice cliffhanger !!! You wouldn’t hurt a cute little nix, would you? Then again… little cat 🫣

LunaScarletLunaScarletabout 2 years ago
Wow

Amazing as always, Harp!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Seems like the noncon parts are being forced into the story. The narrative is also repetitive. We know she's got a fat butt. Sutter thinks it ALL THE TIME. Not flattering.

Not your best effort.

BellaKKBellaKKabout 2 years ago

More more more please

AnimarisAnimarisabout 2 years ago

Like... I knew it was a Snow White re-imagining.... but I forgot that somewhere along the lines. Let me tell you, I CACKLED when I realized the Nix were the dwarves and what gave it away was Ero sneezing (I have no idea how I didn't put that together in the last chapter???). Immaculate storytelling as always--wonderful character development. Sutter and Jaunt's relationship is *chef's kiss*

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Harp here. Harp here. Thanks for your comments and votes. I released The Ballad of Decker Crane on Literotica and have also published it on Amazon. I know it’s weird, but I’ve got readers in both places, I like having an ISBN number, and sometimes people ask me how to show...