All Comments on 'The Ice Flowers Pt. 01'

I am very interested in where you will go from this point.

Can't wait for more!

Well... that was a nice appetizer.. not quite a story or chapter..

Please keep your chapters to at least 2-3 lit pages each.. that would be 2.5-4 single spaced pages in most word processing programs.

When you make it so short your ending the section just as your readers are being able to visualize the story.

Short, but good. Looking forward to more.

Please continue writing. I am highly anticipating more

Nice start, but the story is unfinished.