All Comments on 'The Iceman's Wrath Ch. 03'

Just such funny little interludes!

I wish we could clone you so you could work on both storylines at the same time!

I second the comment by tentaclesforall, the Dad Jason/Wild Jason was hilarious, well done!

Thanks for the story.

I am such a fan of both storylines you are working on. I am always waiting and checking to see when they hit. You do a fantastic job with them. I love that you don't rush them just to get a story out there. Keep up the excellent work.

I want One. I enjoy your story telling . Keep up the excellent craft. MUAH

Very good character development. Smart, funny, and great sex - a rare combination. I look forward to the next friend (or two)!

What a great story.Just don't make us wait so long for the next installment? Thank you for the entertainment!!

I'm too busy following Maria upstairs! :+)))

Normally don't comment, but I'm really enjoying your stories. Keep it up!

I love how you played with the manifestation of personalities in this series. i haven’t seen before on this site and I really enjoy it! Keep them coming!

Who is teaching, who is being taught?

Next?

Please Please Please continue with what happens in the shower PLEASE!!

Hot story. Next....

I'm a fan of your other story so thought I would give this a try. I read all three chapters waiting on the new year, this is just as good , waiting for more.

Fun, funny and fantastic! Well done!

It is said the brain is the largest sex organ. You are delightfully well endowed

Read this entire series and oh my, oh my... Left my mind kinda addled

Kiss kiss kiss kiss!!! You are amazing :) I love House for Horny Monsters, so decided to check this one out. I. So happy I did!!

I'm just not into anal penetration. I gave up on the monster girls when that story went there and now this one has too.

So far as I am concerned, some orifices are made for things to come out of, not for things to go into.

I'll leave this story for those who like that type of thing. It's a pity, because Annabelle is a good writer.

Lue

Great story, really love the two sides of his conscience. In my mind I can see the two figures from 'Night At The Museum', Dad-Jason the Roman Centurion and Wild-Jason the American Cowboy. They bickered with each other throughout that movie, but worked together. Wonderful comic addition to a very sexy scene.

Really good character building thus far, the protagonist is especially likeable.

Looking forward to more in this story line. Thanks for a great read.

a five because I couldn't find the six.

"Dad Jason's hair spontaneously burst into flame, and Wild Jason chased him around the table with a tiny fire extinguisher." Best line in the whole story. I had images of old style Bugs Bunny cartoons running through my head. Love the imagination.

Dad Jason and Wild Jason had me laughing hard enough that my wife was curious about what I was reading. She's a fan now too and she's not much for reading! She couldn't have had a better introduction to Literotica. Thanks, and keep em' coming.

After being with several of my daughters friends, your stories perfectly convey the excitement, feelings and adventure that the encounters bring. Thank you!!

Great story, that would have rated a 5, but I was disappointed that it ended where it did rather than finishing with them falling asleep together. It's all about the follow-thru....

Oh Maria, she just had to lose her innocence and become sexually active. I really like that quality in a young woman, she will be happier for the experience(s). If only we all could find a loving, caring and knowing mature partner while we were in our late teens to learn from. More MILFs (men and women) for everyone! TTFN

Such a hot story.You really write some good ones.Keep um coming.

It plays to every father's secret fantasy.

I like the story so far. I like the fantasy/ethical part where he has his better half and his more libertine half weighing in on his various decisions, but you got an actual laugh out loud when the Dad one's hair burst into flames. Straight off the edge into fantasy without any real warning. Not to say that effortlessly seducing multiple teenage beauties isn't fantasy, but that's relatively pedestrian compared to spontaneous combustion. Also, I'm jealous about all the comments you've received, but you clearly deserve them.

"that would be inappropriate" is the perfect thing to say during orgasm.

Inappropriate my ass, lol really funny well done.

This is probably my favorite story yet. I love Megan and her cute sexiness, but Maria's innocence in this story set me off!

It’s a fun read but I’m also kinda creeped out by it…18 or not it’s just such a cradle robbing experience. I’ll keep reading ‘cause I’m a completion-ist though…😅

So, next? Maria was speaking of Gabrielle? I think you mentioned one other (too lazy to go back and look) but that would be stretching things... nice, wet things, perhaps? :D

Once the kids are off to college, is it time for teacher?

So glad I found this gem! I absolutely love the angel/devil on the shoulder comedy. It's self deprecating humor adds a lightness to what could be an otherwise creepy scenario.Between that and his obvious sweet nature with a desire to give as much, if not more pleasure, He hits a just the right balance. While I love me some dark non-con, this is a fun sexy dabble in the taboo!

Dad Jason and Wild Jason are good story tools. Wonderful!

This is the best chapter so far. The balance of innocence and wanton desire is truly sexy. The idea of a beautiful, polite, innocent, Latina, Catholic college girl asking to be fucked up the ass is both sweet and nasty. You are are good writer. Far above average for Literotica.

This reminds me a lot of the first time I had sex. I had anal waaaaaay before vaginal and I wish it was more like this. Great chapter!

HOT!

Corrupting the catholic school girl...

That was amazing as a way to do anal sex for her & keep her virginity intact.

I love Wild Jason/Dad Jason.....kinda been there, done that :D

undeniably hot, and also fairly pervy-mature dad-dude picking off his daughter's barely legal virgin buds one by one...giving them big sperm douches and enemas...and he's definitely into a power trip...at least a 22 year age differential...

surprised no mention of (hopefully) lush ebony muffin

real surprised he's not making time for the horny single teacher too..

he'd be toast if word ever got out he's schtupping his daughter's bff's

The Dad Jason / Wild Jason bit is hysterical.

Wonder if we'll get some girl play with Megan and Maria and Jason.

Lmao! "Dad Jason was no more than a pile of ashes smoldering over a pair of shoes. Wild Jason stuck the fire extinguisher between his legs, humping the air and discharging powder into the air". Now that is funny! So glad you're working so hard at keeping us hard. I think it's working. Im over here looking a lot like Wild Jason, you bad girl. Many thanks!