by pietro108
5 stars - I actually enjoyed the part where he confronted his ex-wife - she deserved to be called a lying, cheating, skanky, SLUT. The unfortunate skin rashes and potential STD's given to all the enablers/employees was priceless - no violence just PAYBACK.
I was glad the divorce had deceit and infidelity hidden within. Contrary to some of the comments concerning the revenge, Bill finding out about her affair and confronting her,gave him a valid reason for a divorce. SILLY people destroy marriages and encourage infidelity by deceiving wives/women into believing they've missed something sexually by being married. There is always an attractive mandog in the office preying on married women. The revenge was good because it followed the curse he put on everyone. Lack of integrity in a work place causes lots of problems especially from the top down. Bad leaders create bad workers. Something should have been said to Alan. and Rochelle separately or together. Bill should have tipped to check out the bar they frequented.
Great story, really enjoyed it. Well written and paced. Original and creative. The payback was a little unrealistic bit still satisfying. 5 stars
Good one, but I dont think all the yelling was a good idea, lucky him guards liked him, otherwise his ass could've been busted as to numerous witnesses of his bad intentions towards company.
To say this guy is a pathetic cuck was only exacerbated by his infantile revenge. I curse you....really 🤬 that's just embarrassing
Five stars and from the size of the overall rating many others agree with me.
Would of been much nicer if it was longer and detailed the events from the coworkers point of view (just revenge wise). The despair, the suffering, it would be glorious.
4 Stars on a good story .. I hope that the cheaters enjoy their new life .. Yes I am a CPA but we have a Morality code in effect . I have had to tell wives that their husbands were cheating . Also husbands that their wives were Cheating . I do not tolerate that kind of BS
Great imagination with the revenge but I'm not sure that dried poison ivy would have the same effect as the oily fresh stuff.
Hasty and unsatisfactory.
The whole story felt rushed specially at the end.
She had already decided to cheat even before he started to travel.
Anyone, in the civilian world, who sacrifices his family for a job is a fool. The family IS the reason for the job. The requires time be there, help, console, do fun things together.
His marriage was torpedoed even before he got promoted.
His wife got what she deserved. She was a slut that married a slut. Guess she got eat the shit she gave her ex.
Thanks for the creative revenge It was the best revenge effort on your part that I've read so far.
Even a great second read. However, I have to ask myself what self-respecting accountant would work for a company called Ace Accounting?
Pretty enjoyable. Could have dragged out the epilogue a bit with more detailed information. All in all, pretty good.
Very good story, pietro, thanks for sharing it. That was definitely a full blown BTB. Or maybe I should say BTB&B. For what it’s worth I think your story is grossly underrated.
5 stars, for sure.
Get real. No hot woman sits around moaning about her life after divorce for very long. There are too many desperate naive men out there who would crawl naked over a mile of glass just to kiss her feet. Rochelle probably had dates lined up after she and Alan parted ways. Now when she gains 30 pounds and slips over the 50 mark, she might have a little more trouble finding a man, but that's not a given if she has even the slightest of good looks still going on.
Awesome BTB.
I would have loved to read about a last conversation between the divorced spouses.
Still 5/5