by Androgynousother
Loved this new story, with more of your great characters as delightful as ever with three baddies for us to dislike!
A 'blinder' as Del-Boy would have it, 5 stars again.
Excellent story of contrasts and terrific characters. Loved it.
I really enjoyed this story, it had everything, a good love story, lots of fun conflict, and lots of humor. I found myself chuckling out loud through many parts of this story, a good indication of how funny and surprising the story was. You did a really good job with the character development, including the sister, daughter and especially The Idiot Ex.
I look forward to your next story.
Thanks much! Enjoyed the story, especially the three idiots. Looking forward to your next.
It's a good story and quite well told. The Americanisms you keep chucking in are very distracting!
I think that if you took this story to a Romance publisher of the somewhat steamier sort, it would find its way onto the shelves of every supermarket in the English-speaking world, with a cover picture of a rather buff tall Englishman, slightly sweaty, buttons undone halfway down his front, sleeves rolled up, doing - something strong - for or with the lovely lady.
And all the men who love ladies who eat bacon sandwiches, dream in the mornings, and bring competence and practical order to the world, would smile understandingly at it on their beloved's nightstand, and then secretly read it for the voice you bring, and to revel in and learn more about the powerful and beloved people such women are.
Happy new year to you and all.
This is without a doubt the best story in the humor category. One on the best on this sight. Shack stories with Needles and Delaney comes close to bringing a smile to my face as often. Love your writing thank you for having them available.