All Comments on 'The Imperfect Storm Ch. 03'

OMG, absolutely astoundingly great writing.

Truly 5 stars plus.

You having me wishing it was a nice long book.

more chapters please.

sister gets divorced then the 5 move in together the sisters work then kylie is collecting child support and alimony while he writes about the sex lives of the 5 of them

just loving this

But in RL, dairy does not go in a pussy because of the chance of a serious infection. Human mouths have a lot of dangerous bacteria. Dairy, including breast milk, especially that's been in someone's mouth, pretty much is a guaranteed infection. Pussies are great fun to play with, but if contaminated matter get inside, a woman can become ill, risking her fertility and even her life. Clean the cock or hand with plenty of soap after it's been in someone's ass and before it goes in a pussy. And no dairy! She will appreciate having a functional pussy.

Otherwise, pretty wild story and interesting harem building. 4* Dock a point for talking about sucking up his sister's milk and spraying it right up into her pussy. Hot to listen to, but stupid dangerous to actually do. A woman gets wet so it doesn't hurt when a cock or dildo penetrates; the juices flow outward to keep harmful bacteria from getting inside. Safe sex is more than a condom. Just saying.

"You weren't disgusted, I'm so happy! Dick, my darling husband, thinks 'working boobs' are kind of gross."

Okay, once again I acknowledge that this is fiction, but in my more than 60 years of lifetime, I have yet to meet ANY man who "thinks 'working boobs' are kind of gross." I have met one or two who expressed a desire for never tasting their wife's milk when she was lactating. But everyone has always acknowledged that it is perfectly natural and not gross or weird. One of the wives managed to get back at her husband though. He always added cream to his coffee in the form of Half-n-Half. 😋 She offered to refill his coffee but expressed her breast milk into the coffee cup instead of the cream. He never knew the difference and to this day doesn't know. roflmao 😆 🤣 😂

An anonymous person commented on the extremely dangerous health issues presented in this story. Even though they wrote in anonymously, I wanted to thank them for the truthful and accurate information. 4/5

Okay....reviewing my work, I realized that I left out a comment about the bastard cheating on Whitney when he was messing around with Kylie. I love Brother/Sister incest stories. But cheating is cheating. 🙄

So I already took a point off for the horrible health practices, and I'm pulling another one for cheating on Whitney with his sister. 3/5