All Comments on 'The Infinite Bk. 01 Ch. 03'

Maybe a third spell when he covers both eyes at the same time, and or when he covers his ears idk lol

I love the story so far and was thinking maybe he could study runes to learn magic since you mentioned he saw runes when she cast her earth spells. If magic exists in this world a bag of holding would be really helpful and let them eat fresh food instead pf hard tack and allow them to store fresh ingredients to make more potions. And last idea for now, when they move into a different city the apothecary should mistreat Tin so Noah can steal their "recipe" book. Anyhow, using all or none of these plots I am really enjoying your story and your writing style and look forward to many more chapters hopefully.

Good story, really like how it is developing. Keep at it!

Very interesting

I like this story it has some neat things going for it.

"where there is an exploitable resource, you can find capitalists looking to prey on people with money"

Really now? Providing people the goods that they value is exchange for some money equals "preying" on them? Really?

Loving this story keep them coming!

Just expecting how relationship evolves, we need more details on Tina s feelings

Very good , please keep writing!

nice read story needs an antagonist

This is so cool! Just like in a video game, he's leveling up his character's skills and powers. I love all your attention to detail, especially with how resourceful he is with all the crafting.

So glad there are several chapters ahead of me yet to be enjoyed. Thank you for creating this!

I will admit, I am now interested.

nice details, I like the idea of his struggles to work his magic..thanks for the stories

This is my second time through, and am still enjoying. The story is more polished than the average fare on this site and I wonder if I will soon see it gracing the pages of Amazon like so many others that got a good start and a base of followers from Literotica. Then again it's exactly the type of story I look for on Amazon. Giving it 5's so far just for quality and content.

I love this series

Fantastic please keep writing more stories.

I’d have to disagree with an anonymous comment from 3 years ago. It’s NOT cool that this reads too much like a play-by-play of a video game. Margaret Weis & Tracy Hickman’s Dragonlance novels do not read like a D&D session, nor does Andrzej Sapkowski’s novels read like you’re playing the Wild Hunt. After defeating a monster, do you think Jaskier asked Geralt if he leveled up?

Also the section where Noah was describing CPR really sounded wooden and awkward. If he’s this badass main character who’s had LIFETIMES of experiences, he would have caught on how to talk to people of different universes in a way that they’d understand. “Cardiopulmonary Resuscitation” sounds ridiculous in this setting.

It’s an interesting idea so far. Could use.. a lot of work and sadly the second is definitely worse than the first. It’s cool though, all skills need practice, even writing. Feels like some people need a reminder that they’re on a free site reading free stuff. No one is saying it would be good, just gotta get through some sad stuff sometimes. Anyway, keep it up! 2*