All Comments on 'The Infinite Bk. 02 Ch. 02'

by Sage_of_the_Forlorn_Path

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JoTaKuSanJoTaKuSanover 3 years ago

Can i have some more please?? Good Sir!!

yuramwagyuramwagover 3 years ago

Hello the story is at fast pace but oh man that was so fun and super interesting my only wish is it was longggg and long and long.Thanks really appreciate your work.5 star🌟as always

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great Story

I'm playing Skyrim The Elder Scrolls now and I like how this is almost a continuation of the game. More chapters please.

KJay15KJay15over 3 years ago
Glad its still going.

Got a bit cringe in the middle there but I 0ulled through, hope it doesn't get too bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
So intriguing!

Awesome battle scene. I was so nervous that he had lost his ring for good! Crazy how a few of the ogres seemed to sense him even while invisible and still pose a threat to him.

Really intriguing for Noah to meet another magic-wielding smooth operator who turns out to be a beautiful woman. Her magical attacks seem more like video game magic with her shouting out the name of each move. They could learn from each other, and the mutual respect could lay the foundation for a meaningful relationship. I hope he and Alexis spend more time together, but if he's still intent on attending the knight academy then they probably won't. I wonder if he'll have occasion to pass through her town at some point?

Thanks for your work on this!

pk2curiouspk2curiousabout 3 years ago

Awe . How sweet . I hope they hook up .

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Henry ... err Noah meets royalty. And she's fantastic.

And I was thinking his ex, who injured her arm was good.

Speaking of Good. Plot for this chapter is very good. Just needed an editor to make it great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Kinda cheesy, but oh well

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love the pacing and the characters. First reading and really enjoying it.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Second time reading this and still enjoying it

skippersdadskippersdad5 months ago

That was a good chapter, Up lifting.

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