by Sage_of_the_Forlorn_Path
Thanks really appreciate your work 5 🌟 as always,am officially addicted to your work,plz keep them coming.Hope to see Noah being full psycho on her.
I really enjoyed book 1, and this one is great so far too. Thank you for sharing it.
Excellent work as always, I’d be interested in supporting your work via Patreon, should it help.
Cheers,
Dennis
It is rude to criticize such a marvelous gift as your story, but I must point out that there is an incidence of "wonton violence" in it. Wontons are, of course, Chinese dumplings. An over-reliance on spell check can produce the occasional giggle.
I have no idea what’s going on in this story anymore and it’s gotten bad enough that I don’t feel like figuring it out. Honestly, I was hoping for improvement but it feels like every chapter I’m convincing myself to give it one more chance. It’s been like ten of those.
Scattered all over the place, story doesn’t make any sense anymore, so many characters introduced that don’t matter it makes it impossible to keep track of the ones that do. … no more.