by Sage_of_the_Forlorn_Path
Loving this story. Was so happy to see a new chapter published this morning. Very much so looking forward to the next installment
Glad to see chapter 2 is up! No worries about the delay, just thrilled to see your writing continue to improve and entrap me within your world!
Your new Patreon supporter,
Guenhwyvar
Hey, great to see book 3 continue, but this shows up as a new story, not a chapter in the overall story.
I was surprised how much technical knowledge of swordplay could be injected without becoming overwhelming. Well done.
Really good addition to the story line. Stayed up late reading instead of going to bed. Cant wait for next part.
This is one of the best stories I've read yet
I look forward to every installment
Great story. I tried to leave comment (anonymously) on the sexstories.com website, but got the error no such story in return.
Keep up the good work!
The technical detail provided in this chapter was great and refreshing. One of the most memorable chapters I have read. I always enjoy the training and development section in a story.
Wow speechless truly unbelievable 🤩🤩🤩,bro you are talented hope one day I can buy this story coz it's deserve that.Thanks so much really appreciate your work.
Every single charter of each book has me in are of the imagination of the author. The structured approach to detail and timelines is impressive, but most of all, it just a damned good story.
I can't believe I stumbled upon this gem horny and looking for some text to masturbate to and now I can't stop reading
Great story. I thought 'Three Square Meals', was good, and I have been hoping to find a new story as interesting.
I have found yours and I am so happy. Please don't stop, and thank you.
Masterful fight scene! So exciting to follow along. I really like how he asserted himself afterward, asking to be shown due respect for his skills.
There's something more to the rules of magic here... Either the university folks don't know what the Harajin know, or they do and it's a tightly-guarded secret, but either way it's going to be intriguing to discover the essence of magic with Noah and watch how he utilizes it.
So Noah is opposite of Kvothe from The Name of Wind! Kvothe believes making a name for oneself will discourage their enemies from attack while Noah believes in the opposite. Different worlds and different circumstances. Love the story so far. Thank you.