All Comments on 'The Inheritance'

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glorialamuseglorialamuseover 13 years ago
Awesome

Like the fabled Thunderbird the story rises from the internal flame it may have been lost but now it lives again immortal. This was the best incest story I have even read. Plain and simple I loved it. enough said except Thank You.

chytownchytownover 13 years ago
Sorry!!!!

Not this one that's two in a row what's up?????? Keep them coming,

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
Very creative

I enjoyed the fact that she was passed on to her son as his slut and will have to produce an offspring for him to use. Keeping the tradition going for the next generation.

Now that's kinky.

Well done, I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I can't stop reading this

I must have read this story about 12 times since you posted it up. Ive shared it with friends of mine as well and all agree that you are an amazing writer.

I now have many fantasies about your story and get so turned on and wet from reading it.

I would love to see any other Daddy and Daughter stories you have.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Genes

ok here's the math:

The son of the farther and his daughter would have 3/4 his DNA and 1/4 the of the original mother

And now the daughter of the son and farthers daugter would have 11/16 original farthers DNA and 5/16 original mothers DNA

It was a really great story nice and long and it went into lots of detail and the story line is amazing , i did the math because I couldn't get it out of my head

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSabout 13 years ago
Great work

This story was delightfully devious and oh so naughty. good job but its almost too twisted to have your grandma for a mother

hourihourialmost 13 years ago
Now that's what I call REAL PROPERTY =)

Twisted, diabolical and just plain kinky...I loved it! Great writing style and strategic use of word choices to evoke specific emotions and reactions; very creative and made envisioning and anticipating a real treat. Thanks for sharing and looking forward to reading more of your other stories, and awaiting new ones, too.

Cumslut_69Cumslut_69almost 13 years ago

This is a really nice strory, very well written, and not just from a sexual perspective- it's a nice story in it's own right. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
nice

question was her mother her sister and her father actually her brother and so on.. you have to continue this story as well as tell Mr richters and danielle story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
amazing

god i wish that you will continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
excellent!!!!

wonderful little fmily incest tale,,,very erotic,,,more like this, please!!

ChrsinnTXChrsinnTXalmost 11 years ago
eh

little bit rough for my tastes, but a well written story none-the-less.

his2pethis2petalmost 11 years ago
Jealous

This story was amazingly hot. I know it stoked my flames from start to finish. All I can say is damn, I never expected to be jealous of a fictional character named Heather. Keep them and me cumming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More butt

Not enough anal sex

KnightDomKnightDomover 10 years ago
One of my all time favorites

That I come back to again and again!

aVoyager1964aVoyager1964over 8 years ago
Amazing

The father-daughter scenes were beautiful... Thank you for sharing.

somewhatniceguysomewhatniceguyover 6 years ago
this sucks

you are a specialist in mom-son romance, man; you fucked this one up; seriously, I couldn't believe it is one of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
lost me at page three

daughters arent for sharing

Clarissa72Clarissa72about 4 years ago
Wow

Now that was a story... the flow of it was so easy and enjoyable. Honestly the story line was more important than the sex. It was just a great story... Great job!

rbloch66rbloch66about 2 years ago

I didn’t enjoy this at all. The abuse sickens me.

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