All Comments on 'The Inheritance'

Good story, needs a follow up.

Good story. How do they deal back in LA

Loved it. Needs another chapter or two. Get mom involved and it'll be hot as hell.

Perfect solution.

More please, what happens from here? Love to know they move in to the house and live as a couple making babies.

Kind of hard to imagine the one room being clean enough to sleep in, but it's fiction so okay. Liked the story but don't understand how the guy could live in Phoenix without A/C?

Very nice! Please continue.

It didn't read well, learn to write a story that flows well and better details

Very nice

They need to claim each other properly

Very sexy, and it feels like there is room for more story....

Liked this one quite a bit. Wish it would've been a couple pages longer. 5 ⭐️

Good story!!!

Serious business gets even more serious, and hotter. Well done.

CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Very well done.

Questions: why didn't they discuss if she was on birth control instead of pulling out all the time, I'm sure Thea would have loved to feel the heat inside, instead of just outside: how did mother not know that her daughter was trying to seduce her brother with all her actions, and make sure she was on birth control when she got her a dildo, because she was obviously going to become sexually active real soon?

loved it , a shame there isn't more.

Keep the house and move there, get jobs, and live like a married couple. Fuck LA. Five stars, more please.

Great story. I would have liked more, though not necessarily more sex – more build up. Also, I'd have preferred it if realistically Jude had been not to be quite so preciously responsible, Thea hadn't been quite so gaging for it and mutual arousal had developed more slowly. I'd also have liked to see them setting about cleaning the house and making it nice, and also the story continuing at least until he could safely come inside her. But despite all that is was still a great read.

Well done. Brother and sister are finally put in a situation where they come to terms with their sexual desires for one another. Hopefully you will follow-up with a second chapter, where their sexual escapades include having relations while watching some of the porn films now in their possession.

I wish someone would write about the use of condoms and birth control.

Not my favorite from you. But you are still my favorite writer on here by far. I get fired up just seeing your name next to a story. Thank you for all of your stories and keep up the good work.

thank you so much for this very big incest, Thea is well fucked and a lot of cum face...thanks more, a baby?

Pretty good, but I don't think that your driving time surrounding Joshua Tree to be believable. The way I added it up placed the national park roughly 1/2 way in their trip. Three and a half hours would be half of Judes 7 hour drive estimate. But Joshua Tree is easily 4.5 hours from Phoenix. I apologize if I sound too nitpicky.

Otherwise, I really enjoyed it. 4/5

Thanks! Very hot! How about a sequel with Mom?

Enjoyed the story a lot. However it needs a follow up. AAAAAA++++++