All Comments on 'The Initiation of Mary'

Now that's what you call a pock her night, lucky girl, now we need a replay on her meeting with the other wives.

I was glad the wives have arranged a lunch. Now Mary will find out about the wives "Fuck buddies" they have picked up from dating sites etc. Why should their husbands have all the fun?

Re Editing. Sorry but even though many editors do it for "free" and the fun of it, they must pick up basic spelling errors. Todger65 has to learn the difference between "your" and "you are" (abbreviated to "you're". Examples: "Your good at that" and "Damn your hot". Sadly, so many writers on this site cannot spell correctly. But editors should pick up most of them. (not all! lol. No one's perfect) Cheers.

Very excellent story! Thank you. :-)

Thanks for sharing this story. A nice little twist on the classic poker night set up. Looks like I may have to teach my husband how to play poker. I know there are a few of his friends that I wouldn't mind playing Poke Her with me!!

A sick author

I love to see my wife sucking and fucking other guys

I hope you'll continue with this and tell us what happens with the wives?

While this isn't normally my favorite type of story, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

You've left this wide open for a sequel, and I hope to see a continuation.

5 stars from me. Thanks!!!

wish i could give it a higher rating but 5 stars will have to suffice. Keep up the amazing work

Nice, most enjoyable, would really like my wife to join this poker club, while I could be an observer

I mean really. This was just ludicrous.

1 star

Not sure what you are doing to fake the impossibly high rating, but I hope it is worth it.

What pathetic crap.

Tell us about the wives. Do they get another cock to play with while hubby plays poker

Beautiful story. Wish I had such a time with any of the women I have been with including wife. Keep it up. Also make her get pregnant and milking. Keep it up.

But it's in the top 10

I see comments are split between cuck lovers and btb readers. I don't like these stories where the participants should have stayed single and free to have casual sex when they please. If you live on the cuck side I'm sure this story got high marks as, apart from a few spelling issues, it was well written. However, after 4 years they aren't satisfied with each other and are each seeking sex thrills with others. A recipe for divorce within a year or two. Because of the decent writing I gave 3 stars. Usually 1 for this type of story.

First things first: 5* for a fun story, well told. BUT...

I almost dinged you down to 3* because of lazy grammar:

As is often the case with Lit writers, you seem to struggle with the word 'your.' Let's give you a hand:

'Your' is a possessive pronoun, as in "May I borrow your truck?"

'You're' is the contraction of two words--you and are--as in "You're not going to lend me your truck, are you?"

Got it? OK, then. PLEASE stop misusing 'your' throughout your stories. If you don't, you're going to be run out of town in that truck.

Don't you dare stop. I don't think any man alive will forgive you if we can't share the ladies lunch1

nicely written, but the old man didnt get any at the end of the night so that goes straight to cuck city in my book.

Comments will save you from degrading your brain with a cuck story. I’d ask how a cuck story managed to get this high a rating but I realized I don’t care.

Ugly story, wish I could give it a lower rating, but *2 will have to do.

Well written and exciting. Good job.

Nice read.

This need another chapter for Bob and the ladies

Great story very well told! By far the hottest of the poker stories I cant wait for the next installment!

Can not wait to hear about the Ladies lunch.

Lovely story. Looking forward to more

Poker game is a well used backdrop but your twist is great. This could be a good series with the wives doing their own thing on poker n.

Certainly hot for the wife host and the guys, would like to see what women say about the story.

Really liked it but i think it would have been cool it the other wives had been there to watch and cheer on their husbands

Love poker stories. Nice flow , nice storie. Thank you.

Interesting story might need a visual of the chair.