All Comments on 'The Innocent Slut: At the Bus Stop'

by LindaMichelle

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willy9ishwilly9ishabout 15 years ago
not bad

I like it the start of a good series of teasing I think! Even more exciting when you come from Singapore where things are a little more restrictive these days. Keep writing LindaMichelle

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
GETTING A SHOW

FANTASTIC FIRST STORY THE INNOCENT SLUT AT THE BUS STOP.

NOW FOR MORE PARTS OF THIS EXCITING FIRST STORY.

EXCELLENT WRITING WELL DONE YOU.

Naked1Naked1about 11 years ago
Woa....

Wait! What just happened? I'm so hard...is there more? There has to be more! (Frantically searching your author page...)

I have to know what happens next to this hot little vixen!

zazrix9zazrix9over 4 years ago
i'd want ti read

about her wearig tight yoga pants, showing off her camel toe, wetness from her honey Pot. Another where skirt is longer, but it slides to the transparent row at the top, showing off sweet wares.

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