All Comments on 'The Intern'

I think that he is an ugly person cheating on his girl friend and Taylor as well since he has’t warned her

As an example of erotic writing it is above average but the narrator is sadly lacking in conscience

I didn't bother trying to read. As soon as I saw the thousand word paragraphs I skipped on by. I would have thought you learned a few things by your 6th story.

obviously the authors fingers were too sticky too type well, abysmal spelling - or is it grammar? This doesnt rate a 4 in any category,

Pick a tense and stuck with it. Past, or present. Choose, commit, and then proofread.

Let's be frank, it wasn't good. Fails to achieve two stars.

Paragraphs far too long.

Quotation marks where nothing was being said.

No quotation marks when something IS being said.

Poor grammar and punctuation.

You need to read some of the tutorials in the help section.

Good story. Ignore the prudish morality police. I don’t know why they bother kink shaming on a sex story website.

I liked it. But, I couldn't believe that with her being so hot, that you didn't go down on her, before you entered her.