All Comments on 'The Intern: An Anal Training'

Looooove it!

Wow! Totally hot! One of your best, Jasmine, despite calling Judy "Jane" at least once and several times calling her "Marcy". I thought you had proofreaders. But none of those glitches comes remotely close to making this chapter anything but a five-star episode. And I suspect that the final chapter of this tale is not the only thing that will be coming (cumming) soon! LOL

Dr beulahthebrit; Excellent second episode, Jasmine, hopefully not too long for pt3, one must hope that Judy not only gets well anally fucked by Ralph, but by Macy and Ryan as well, perhaps all at the same time. Glad to see that we are back to a nice bit of detailed anal fucking, personally my favourite occupation, especially combined with some cock-sucking and pussy eating. 5 stars naturally.

looking forward to the next chapter, as always jaz a really good delivery on all aspects of the story, plz keep writing xxx

WOW!!! That was HOT!!! Nonstop pleasure. Awaiting next chapter. Will it be a four way in the King-size bed? PLEASE!!!!!!! Maybe Ralph brings a stripper to join in?

All I can say is WOW! Another great story, Jasmine. Looking forward to the next installment.

Am I the only one who feels bad for the husband?

Ok … I’m addicted … great read

Waiting for the next part!!!! Hope it would be released very soon.

Hot, hot, hot!!

more please :-)

Awesome story, can't wait for the next chapter

Waiting for more!!!!

I love how you incorporate the soft, warm loving into this. it adds so much realness into the story. thank you for it.

Wow, one of the best stories ever on literotica! Pushes all the right buttons for me.

And this deserves more, of course!

This is a great and well written story. One of my favorites so far. Not just this part, but the whole series of it. Thank you for sharing. It arouses all of the senses, whether you are male or female. Especially if y have a you have sub tendencies. One of the best I have read on Lit. so far.

Well, what I love about this story is that I think Marcy does care about not exposing Judy's sex life. Often blackmail soon rears its ugly head and lives are destroyed. I don't think that is going to happen and it would be very good to see blackmail not figure into this story.

I must not have read the same story as those who commented how well written it is. There were many, and I mean many, wrong words, often caused by missing letters, amongst other things. It came across as being rushed and quite sloppy. Very much unlike your normal product. Somewhat ruined an otherwise fun tale.

so so...

so so...

557. Interesting story with lots of mistakes in word selection as are most of your stories. But this had a plethora of errors which makes me wonder about the proofreading. There is a good storyline, but I can’t really get too interested in the general topic of ass training and fucking.