by Spookymuffin
Cannot wait for more from these two young ladies please brilliantly written.xxx
Personally I liked this story. I thought that it was short but very sweet. And I can't forget to mention sexy!
Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout)
This really had the potential to be a sweet story, with a different take on a typically tired setup. The sex just felt way too rushed. I think you should alter the story so that there's some time to build tension. The knee-kissing was very cute, but take it slow after that!
At one point Gina thinks "...no man had ever made her feel like this. They were too quick to get to fucking...." Ironically, that also describes this story.