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I dialed her extension into my office phone, and called her in. When she entered, she closed the door behind her, leaving the two of us alone. I remained silent as my mind tore itself apart. She spoke.
"You haven't been in all week. I was worried about you."
I remained silent. Trapped in my head.
"I wanted to talk to you on Tuesday about what happened I—" It was my turn to speak.
I spoke slow and cool. "I also wanted to talk to you about that incident." She listened to me with a silent confidence, like she, again, held the power in our dynamic. "You have proven, on Monday, that you are unwilling to cooperate, respect your superiors, and keep your emotions in check," my voice was shaking and I never met her eyes, her beautiful, brown eyes. "Additionally, you acted inappropriately on company property after work hours." I took a breath. "I'm going to have to fire you."
She never lost her confidence walking closer towards my desk. "No, you don't have to," She whispered. "And you don't want to, do you?" I shook my head no guiltily. "No, of course you don't." She caressed my face. "What do you want?"
Nervously, I looked down, taking my shaking hands to the buttons on my blouse, struggling to open my shirt, exposing my naked breast, offering them haphazardly to the woman before me. I needed more of what I had that Monday night. I needed to be calmed, soothed. I needed someone to relax this war inside my head, to make a decision for me. I needed Tess. I looked up at her. "I want you."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 6 years agogreat start, good character development but she caved too soon and too easily, unrealistic
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoBoth seem should be unemployed for incompetence and insubordination.
graymangazeralmost 6 years agoNice set up with interesting characters, a good description of thoughts and emotions, which I particularly like. Although written from a first person POV Tess could do with a little padding out, it's frustrating reading most stories that concentrate on the main character only.
Only one small critique, in two parts; Harper's initial submission was way too quick and easy. The confrontation was believable but I think the scene could have been extended for a few more paragraphs before she allowed herself to be spanked, also more of her thoughts and emotions while being punished. Secondly (or could it be thirdly?) Harper showed no previous leaning towards lesbianism, yet within a few hours of again seeing Tess she not only accepted that she wanted her but shamelessly exposed herself. Nothing wrong within the context of the story but I believe there might have been more inner turmoil and persuasion.
This is posted in BDSM but also has the feel of a strong lesbian love story, hopefully you can continue with both aspects.
I'm looking forward to where this goes. Thanks and five stars from me.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoPlease keep this going. The build-up and character roles including internal conflict are great. Looking forward to seeing how this develops.
