All Comments on 'The Intruders Pt. 01'

by ZennaSwallows

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
I really hope you do...

I loved your story...gonna save it to my favorites...hope there is at least a part 2...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Robbers don't typically spend the day spreading their DNA and victims aren't shy when they have a chance to escape. Don't waste your time continuing.

richgo50richgo50over 1 year ago

I did not think I would enjoy the forced sex as I am not into violence but I was totally wrong. The sex parts were excellent, just like "Brandi's I got a hard on while reading it. Can't wait for the next chapter. For me it was a well written and very arousing story.Thank you Zenna.

SissyTaraSissyTaraover 1 year ago

Loved the storyVery hot. I look forward to more I do wonder if the hole thing was a setup.

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I'm a writer of erotic fiction, almost of all of it dealing with forced feminisation, a topic of inexhaustible fascination to me. Please feel free to get in touch with me at zennaswallows@gmail.com. I'm currently working on the fourth chapter of Trapped in Number Six and hope...

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