All Comments on 'The Invitation Ch. 01'

Great start. Can't wait for the next installment.

Good start to this story can't wait to see where it goes . Thanks for the story

not sure about the "blackmail" aspect. seems pretty contrived.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

I wonder if he is guilty or is this a reward.

What about medications, especially birth control? Everything they brought is in checked baggage? What about carry ons? Must be taking place along time ago, as no one in hs or college would walk anywhere without their cellphone.

As much as I don’t like the setup, i have to give it 5 stars for being the first story in over a thousand I’ve read that main characters expressly say they are overweight and don’t go to the gym. I’ll glady give every accolade possible to any story that doesn’t mention the gym, six pack abs, pecs, or any other non sexual muscle.

Cumon second chapter . . . .