All Comments on 'The Iron Prince'

Very nice.

Very good writing but the story seemed to lack "heart." Thanks for sharing this tale with us.

That Alssa was some sort of a traitor was obvious quite soon (much to soon). No big surprises and a lack of felt emotions. Nicely written, but the whole story seems a bit lifeless.

Lifeless? Lack of heart? You must be kidding, or perhaps they just lack the imagination a good tale sometimes asks of the reader, nonetheless Aranthir is most certainly a worthy protagonist, easy 5⭐️’s