by TheNovalist
As with nearly every previous commenter, I am very happy with the storyline, the pace of the storyline, and especially the eagerness of the women to do what it takes to re-populate the world when the time comes for that.
I do have a question about the openness of the group to exposure. Every one of our island dwellers has accepted the notion of being completely open to public sex, and many of them have had no qualms about being observed performing a variety of sex acts. They also have no issues with bathing together in the nude. However, once they're finished, everyone seems to feel a need to get their skimpy clothing back on as soon as possible. Is this some kind of minimal modesty that the Goddess is allowing them to retain? Or, is it now time for the group to acknowledge that the small amount of clothing they still have available is not necessary? I hope it's the latter.
The plot thickens! Freya is warping their minds very severely. She told the protagonist earlier that he would be a leader. In this chapter she tells him he'll never be a leader, but he has other qualities which are just as important. Not that she's necessarily wrong, but she constantly changes it up on them.
Freya is becoming increasingly suspect in her intentions. She keeps changing it up. Earlier she told the protagonist he would be a great leader. Now she tells him he has no future of leadership. He has an odd combination of being the only on who hasn't totally lost touch with reality and the only on talking to Freya...as far as we know...
Holy wtf! This cliffhanger is going to kill me. I know I have to wait for the next upload. omg really? sigh, ok fine, I'll just sit here and wait for the next one. (insert smiley face)