All Comments on 'The Island Ch. 17'

Great thrilling

Keep goin 😊😊

Yet another fantastic chapter my friend please keep em coming oh and I’m seriously thinking about joining you on Patreon you deserve to be compensated for all the effort you put into entertaining us all.

Bit of a time since you posted but glad to see you're back with more of this enthralling story.

Welcome back, @TheNovalist ! So glad to be back on the island. This has been another fantastic chapter, and I look forward to more.

Welcome back, @TheNovalist ! So glad to be back on the island. This has been another fantastic chapter, and I look forward to more.

Not gonna lie i was a bit disappointed with this chapter, This has been one of my fav stories on lit , however i felt this chapter was a bit slow and not much progress was made, in tv land this would fall into a "filler" category ,a wee bit too much sex chat. (never did i ever think those words would come from me ) please dont think this feedback is negative , the island has been brilliant and i cant wait for you to continue with the main plot.

Cheers J.

nice to see you are back in action.

Novalist, seems like you released this one just to keep us coming back to the story,,,, Sorry, love your work, but this reads like a filler,,,

all this story needs is for him to rub all this is his cheating ex wife and his scumbag ex best Friends faces while they cope and seethe in the homeless shelter.

This has been a very interesting story for me and I am looking forward to the next chapter

Dear Novalist. I have thoroughly enjoyed this series, just like NewU. Yes, it is with baited breath that I wish to enjoy these stories to completion. Thank you for sharing.

I am a little confused if you blow the ammo, it starts an eruption in the volcano. That would kill both Fieja and Mother? Other than that, I have enjoyed the series very much.

Syd: It would take one hell of an explosion, at the bottom of the caldera, to have even a remote chance of breaching a volcano's magma pocket. Even then, you would just expose the magma pool. An eruption requires built up pressure to propel the materials.

Nova: please, please give us more!