All Comments on 'The Jabberwock's Treasure Pt. 02'

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Monmusu_WriterMonmusu_Writerover 5 years ago
Brilliant

Monster Girl stories with happy endings are pretty much my favourite genre. You've done a great job at capturing the spirit of Wonderland and MGE in general. Keep on writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Womderful

Long time reader first time commenter loved this story the struggle for her to accept Her love of him was beautiful loved it can't wait for another story and if u did another monster girl story I'd love it personally keep it up

Archangel_MArchangel_Mover 5 years ago
Magnificent

I don't see how it could have been sweeter, and the only way it could be hotter is if the new couple "adopted" one of the Alices. (That would totally contravene their characters, though, so no.) Bravo! <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
snicker-snack

i think lewis carrol would be mortified at his pure and pristine wood being polluted beyond salvaging: unless he could play with the horny alices and maybe a few of the fluffy ones.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefabout 4 years ago

Monsters with a sense of humor, funny in it's self. Another story of monsters, magic and drama, with a little sex thrown in. I found it strange at first that all the characters in Wonderland were female. All of the books, movies, etc. of Alice in Wonderland have most of the characters being male, but it worked out so it wasn't an issue.

This is another true love that has a happy ending, just wished I could have heard the prince's mother when she found out what happened to her little princess.

Well done and thanks for another great story.

bhojobhojoover 3 years ago

Lovely conclusion tot he tale.

A couple of places where there seem to be typos. Could you please check ?

"waited until she was settle before he began."

"What's are you saying, my love?"

skippersdadskippersdad3 months ago

Very good story. Thank you for posting.

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Back in the game writing monstergirl, fantasy and sci-fi stories. My favourite themes are gentle femdom (think valiant female knights rescuing young men in distress!), yuri (Japanese-style romanticised lesbian fiction) and older-woman, younger-man relationships. I hope you enj...

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