All Comments on 'The Jacuzzi Ch. 01'

Great pace and build up. So much more to cum I hope.

I'm sorry but what's the point they are married two different people I might see the two swinging but if they ain't goin to be together in the end what's the point

Classy, realistic, good timing and build up. Good writing too.

This was absolutely the best written piece I have read in ages. It was written perfectly. Grammar was spot on. So many people forget that a great story has to be believable, at least in the readers's mind. I didn't have to wade through monster sized boobs and a small woman and a gorilla dick on a man. This did everything to peak my interest and could read another chapter right now.

Nice part 1. You have set the stage nicely for the next chapter. Looking forward to reading it.

Nice story in its own right if a stand alone I would probably give it a 4 star rating I mean all they did was masterbate in front of each other. As a foundation for follow on chapters it has typical AddToWater 5 star possibilities! I'm thinking that proverbial glass is "half full" and watch for some hot follow-on(s).

BTW, Glendale isn't that far from Bel Air and hubby could easily have made a day or few hours presence over a two week period. There is wiggle room for creativity here.

The Oldsage_1 says 5 stars

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SAGE

Excellent story, very hot. Excellent writing, spot on in every way. Five stars because there is not 10 available**********

Please write more chapters!!!

Well done!

The pacing, the language, the characters, all work well to make a believable story.

I wouldn’t want to do this with my own sister, but if I had a sister as in the story, I think it would be an amazing experience. As is, I’d love to experience this with a special friend.

Excellent story. I want MORE.

I want them to have wild sex and agree to return every year to show their sibling love.

No guilt. . No remorse. Just wonderful, beautiful sibling love and affection .

Really enjoyed the story.

OMG! ;-p

Great series.

This is a really good story. You are are a very gifted author. Your style of writing is always intriguing. Can't wait to read more.