All Comments on 'The Jacuzzi Ch. 03'

Incredible writing that draws us readers into both the passion and love between the siblings. Look forward to their future...

Great chapter I wonder if your going to make a 2nd page to continue the chapter 3 then after that chapter 4 of the story since there was a story development and story between them urge they both have for one another I hope both the brother and oyster have happy end with one another since life does throw curveballs makes us strike out other case it may not be them strikes out but maybe her husband bit of mingle when she was with her brother dealing with the mansion house of their parents etc she finds out later and same goes for her brother wife did the same or both the brother and sister spouse Mingle with each other hmmm possibilities are endless

Excellent story...I really hope they can find a way to be together...at least occasionally!

plz tell me there's more

Your writing of this story is outstanding

WOW!

Great story.

Each chapter better than the last.

I will be sorry when you finish.

Nice!

WOW!!!!!! GREAT STORY