All Comments on 'The Jamesons Ch. 01'

me 2 have a MR somethin 4 ya :)

Um, so you liked it? I'm not too "up" on internet shorthand. I could make out the smily-face, though. Thanx

Please rate my story! I love knowing what others think of my fantasies. Keep an eye out for "Her Journal". I just submitted it. It's a real journal entry about anal sex.

The scenario is a hot one, and arguably a classic.

I guess I found the dialog a little wooden and unnatural. The plausibility wasn't quite where I'd like it to be either. A little build-up or seduction would have gone a long ways.

Still, a good story, just not "great" in my mind.

Very Hot. I liked the seduction. You could have drawn it out a bit more for effect but over all still a very, very, good effort. The sex was well done and I think a sequel could be interesting. Maybe have them become a permanent trio? Just a thought.

Damn, this story got me GOING! =)

applause for the writer! Bravo! well done!

I agree, tho, that some of the dialogue was a little forced. I gave you a four, anyway! Great stuff!