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justins961justins961over 2 years ago

Fantastic recap! Really added a new spice to things! Looking forward to more.

solarex1solarex1over 2 years ago

A great addition to this ever evolving story! Nice hearing things told from Jenna's perspective, and in diary format too. Brilliant way to create a new perspective on the previous story lines. Love it!

Lovecraft_LoreLovecraft_Loreover 2 years ago

Great recap.

It might have worked better as a letters and transcipts story but almost no one reads those stories.

I did think it was odd that there was nothing on COVID despite being set in the current time period. Then again, it could be lamp shaded, there are plenty of college students who don't see any diseases as existing including STDs.

Djmac1031Djmac1031over 2 years agoAuthor

Dang it. I hate re-reading my own stories and realizing I forgot to add something. I really wanted to include an entry about how Shiane had to leave school early because she got pregnant. And how this affected Jenna's views on unprotected sex. A minor detail, to be sure, but one I meant to touch on.

Uniquelyme60Uniquelyme60over 2 years ago

I agree with the other comments (2) so far. Interesting to have Jenna's point of view as a recap of events. It also provided a little bit of insight in to Jenna's character. Looking forward to the story continuing and evolving further. Keep up the great work.

Djmac1031Djmac1031over 2 years agoAuthor

@Lovecraft_Lore: I don't have an issue with stories that include Covid, in fact I just wrote an incest story where Covid is a factor. But this is supposed to be fantasy escapism, so who wants dreaded reality creeping in? Lol

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrabout 2 years ago

Awesome hearing her point of view, thanks ;->

joeoggijoeoggi11 months ago

Great characters. Sexy situations. Keep it going!

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