All Comments on 'The Joanne Chronicles: The Knife'

could have summed it up in a page

*Puuuurrrrrrrrr* Loved it!

Liked this submission a lot. Perhaps a little long, but excellent treatment of this subject area. Hope you get bogged down again and want to continue this series. Just wanted you to know that your contributions to this site much appreciated.

GREAT PIECE AND I DON'T THINK THAT ITS TOO LONG, LENGTH IS GOOD WHEN YOU DEVELOP THE CHARACTERS

Oh. My. God. That was gorgeous!!! Wonderful! And not at all too long!

I expected good and got better! Sexier than any ten essays rolled together and very well written. My only complaint is a personal hangup: In an effort to add that one last kick, the anal sex was a a big turnoff, and VERY unnecessary.

I expected good and got better! Sexier than any ten essays rolled together and very well written. My only complaint is a personal hangup: In an effort to add that one last kick, the anal sex was a a big turnoff, and VERY unnecessary.

OMG this was NOT too long - it was amazing from start to finish. And the anal sex was not unnecessary it was the icing on the cake!! Jees Im still panting from readin it!have read other stuff you have written and loved it all. GO ! WRITE MORE! GO !!