All Comments on 'The Job Ch. 01'

I hope he moves on to Mom

can't wait for the next part. only criticism is the age - hes 18 or 19, she and mom 36. they should have been a little older.

What is wrong with the age?

Woman, no kids...how can she be a MILF?

I was in court once, supporting a friend who was fighting a ticket. The Judge said, "I don't want to hear stories." One person tells a story and the next one tries to top it and the day get's longer and longer. We all want out of here so no sotries or your fine goes up."

So it is with women ejaculating the first time I heard that it was a bit. then it became a gusher. Now she's puddling on the floor. I figure January will be the beginning of the 5-gallons of liquid on the floor. Yeah, the guys are trying to top each other and we're going to be here all day.

Speaking of "being here all day," why leave? Scared? Embarrassed? You don't want to keep having fun?

Either you will continue the story, or you won't. We'll find it if you do but that's a Fourth-grader's conclusion of a story. "There would be an interesting story when I got home," is a perfect conclusion. Leave it there.

I HATE STORIES THAT JUST STOP IN THE MIDDLE OF THE ACTION. FINISH IT!

Let me start by saying thank you for writing this story and I a m looking forward to reading the restofyihr story when you choose to post it. To the naysayers I would like to point out that there are plenty of people who have children in their teens. I know plenty of teens that have had children so being 36 and having an 18 year old is perfectly normal seeing how I just turned 35 and I have a 16 year old daughter.

and yes there were a few miner mistakes but who is perfect, everybody who read it knew what the idee was so don't inflate them and why do so anonymus, if you stand behind your comment have the decency to show your name.

Sweet!!

He needs to visit again to sample her milk.

And one and done? She's not getting her moneys worth.

Can't wait to read more!

Nice of mother to love her son enough for him to have her blessings.

what a scum of the earth whore. run son run! 1 star just to vote