All Comments on 'The Jogger'

Seriously childishly written. Grow up.

The story could use a bit more development. While I'm sure every guy would like a hot chick to want to suck his dick after a five minute conversation in the store, it is a bit unlikely.

I like the basic idea, but the story is just too short. There is no meat to the story. He meets her, she immediately wants to go home with him, and they immediately jump into bed together, and decide to stay together. I like a story that gets me involved in the characters and the setup as well as the physical aspects.

Please try again.

Fantasy meet reality.

I don’t necessarily agree that it’s childish but i do think it should be extended a bit longer. Also, I’m a little bit weirded out by the 14 year age gap because that would mean an 18 year old guy is screwing a 4 year old. Overall it’s a good story, I would really like to read a more ‘edited’ version