All Comments on 'The Journal Ch. 01'

While I find dont find missing limbs to be sexy in anyform. I did like the writing style, the plot and the overall way the author wrote on the subject. I dont think I will read the next chapter but from what I did read of this one its going to be interesting if your into this type of erotica.

from my point of view it belongs in erotic horror not loving wives. She may be a loving wife in the true sense but the scenes are not erotic but of horror. I do wonder how this obcession or fetish came about.

If we can allow horny cheating wives or husbands in this section, why can't we allow horny amputeed wives or husbands. It is not the outside appearance, but the inside appearance that counts. You have my attention...continue.

The author captured the husband's emotions and devotions with uncanny accuracy. I know because I'm sort of in the same boat. My wife had a stroke 8 years ago, 7 days before our 49th wedding anniversary. I had to make the decision to proceed with a surgical procedure which eventually was responsible for the stroke. Then I had one hour to make the next decision whether to administer the drug which could either reverse the effects of the stroke, or forever make her a vegetable. After much soul searching and confering with doctors, I decided to withhold the drug. <p> <p> <p> After 5 weeks of intensive physical, occupational and speech therapy at a world class rehabilitation center, she recovered quite nicely, physically, but she cannot speak. After two years of speech therapy (at $5/min.) three times a week, I again had to decide we had reached a point of diminishing returns and stopped the therapy. <p> <p> <p> All this time I've had to do the cooking, shopping, house work, letter writing, talking, and most important of all, the *thinking* for two people. So I well understand the emotions of the husband in this story, and the author has captured them exceedingly well.

The erotic scenes did not have the fetish tones (for me) that some seem worried by. But then I am busily dreaming about that huge, highly set clit. Now that is a potential fetish subjet. It sounds wonderful to me.

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Of course, I will read the next one to find out what he is guilty about! Thanks!

I think another chapter would be nice if only to keep the story going. Thanks .............Rich

The characterizations and story telling going well.

powerful and - yes, erotic. Comprehensible display of the husbands guilty feeling regarding his fetish. And the anticipation of even more coming as the wife seems so loving and positive in face of this traumatic experience. They appear very able to be really good for each other. Great! Just go ahead.

Thanks for the offering. I feel like I missed something. The revelation of his fantasy is not clear, so I am uncertain of why he is afraid.

You're a brave man, Owen. Cheers!

How is this in LW and not in Fetish?

Yet another pathetic fetish story hidden in LW.

I hope you've been able to afford the therapy that you so deeply needed.